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Post by frostleaf on Apr 10, 2009 13:03:17 GMT -5
Name: Frostleaf Gender: Female Age: 29 moons Rank: Deputy Desription: Frostleaf is a small, blue-grey cat with a long muscular legs for running and pouncing and has a moderate length tail. Her eyes are gold and seem to glow in the dark. She has very few scars at this time. Personality: Frostleaf is moody type of cat. She is happy and playful one minute and can get angry the next when she doesn't get her way. She is fiercely loyal to her clan and her kin and will defend them at any cost. She likes to go to the nursery and play with the kittens. When she gets time from her duties she also a likes to help with the sick and elderly cats. She is a good huntress and is not afraid of anything. She meets everything with ferocious courage and determination no matter what it is. She is well liked and respected. Kin: Owlstar-leader of SwampClan RP Sample: Frostleaf was hunting snow hares for the elders.Then she spoted three snow hares hopping down an ice cavern. She said to herself,"That seems like enough for the elders to eat." She began to stalk the hares down the cavern. She got in position to attack but saw a fly and she started trying to hit it. Once she gets back on track she got back in the attack position again. She got ready and went for the attack but didn't see the ice and slid into the wall, meowing," I need to work on my foot work." She got up and went back to hunting.
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Post by Eaglestar on Apr 10, 2009 13:16:25 GMT -5
Nicely done Frost. I see one or two grammatical errors but I'll fix those up for you. Its highly unlikely that 3 rabbits would all be together though. Also, post a picture. If you fix those two things, I'll approve her.
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Post by Eaglestar on May 1, 2009 16:22:16 GMT -5
Approved! Nice picture, by the way.
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